2009. A symbol is an object, action, or event that represents something or that creates a range of associations beyond itself. In literary works a symbol can express an idea, clarify meaning, or enlarge literal meaning. Select a novel or play and, focusing on one symbol, write an essay analyzing how that symbol functions in the work and what it reveals about the characters or themes of the work as a whole. Do not merely summarize the plot.
There are a lot of clumsy people in this world, so a character dropping something in a story shouldn’t mean anything, it’s just something that happens in life. But when analyzing a literary work you have to realize that most everything means something. In Nella Larson’s Passing, we see how simply dropping a teacup is a symbol, and thereby how it affects the work and discusses characters or themes.
One of the main characters in Passing, Irene, is hosting a small party when she notices her world is crumbling in around her. Her best friend, Clare, is talking to Irene’s husband Brian, when it clicks in her mind that they must be having an affair. We as the reader don’t know what it is that makes her think that, and we don’t know whether or not she’s right, but as she realizes it, she drops the teacup she’s holding. The teacup breaks instantly as it hits the floor, and we realize instantly it must be a symbol. The question is, what does it mean?
The broken teacup has a few different meanings, the first one reveals things about Irene’s mental stability. Basically her grip on reality broke with the teacup. She had always trusted Brian and Clare but all of a sudden she thinks they’re having an affair. For the rest of the novel, Irene is changing. She is more jealous and suspicious, more malicious, and her thoughts become rather scrambled. For example, at the end of the novel Irene helps expose Clare’s race to her husband (he thought she was white when she was really a fair skinned black), which she knew was the most dangerous thing that could happen to Clare. And at the very end Clare falls, jumps or was pushed out of a window. We don’t know which it is, because Irene is our narrator and her thoughts have become amazingly jumbled.
The teacup reveals things about Clare as well as Irene. The teacup is porcelain, and the color of porcelain is off-white, which matches Clare perfectly. This is because Clare is “passing”. In the time that novel takes place, blacks and whites were still fairly segregated and extremely racist. The blacks had significantly worse lives than the whites so some of the really fair skinned backs would try to pass as whites. Clare Kendry was one of those blacks, she took her “passing” so far as to even marry a white man. The blacks who “passed” were likely to be killed if the truth was ever discovered. When the teacup falls from Irene’s hand and breaks we see foreshadowing of the end. The teacup is Clare, falling out of a window, breaking or dying.
When we look back at this we see that Larson didn’t leave an ambiguous ending as most people believe. She spells out the answer to everyone’s question. How did Clare fall? Did Irene push her out of jealousy and spite? Did she jump, trying to finally free herself from her self-constructed prison? Or did she fall, just slip, was it all a horrible accident? Larson tells the answer with the teacup. It is dropped by Irene, which shows us that Clare was pushed by Irene.
Kaelyn, I'm going to be totally honest when I say that you have the most adorable voice within your writing. But I can't say I feel it's really appropriate for the prompt style. Avoid words like we and you...because you don't need to teach the AP people anything, they just want to see that you know it!
ReplyDeleteYour first two paragraphs feel like they are supposed to be one big intro-thesis. I get that you are writing about a tea cup which symbolizes a and b. I feel like you can get rid of your first statement of your first paragraph and even your second. Combine the remaining sentence with a little bit of information you give in the 2nd paragraph. TAP.
Your body paragraphs give a great deal of detail that enhance your analysis of the symbolism within the tea cup, just make sure that you don't summarize the entire story!
Your biggest success to me was the 4th paragraph when you talk about the "porcelain and off-white" of the teacup. It really symbolizes as well as points out the themes of the work as a whole. This contributes to your already great statement about Irene's point in the book.
Your thesis needs to be more specific about your goals, why is it a symbol and what meaning does it have?
ReplyDeleteThe goal of your essay is to prove and explain the meaning, when you end the first paragraph in such a fashion you still have not revealed your goal.
You give a great amount of detail, but there are too many questions. You are answering the question not asking new ones, the reader is not responding, you are proving.
Other than that, great job!
Overall, I think this is pretty well done. My only real issue with this essay is what Lucas has so ably pointed out--and I wish you'd followed his advice and clarified your thesis so that you were making a definite claim about the work's theme that you would discuss later on in the essay. After all, this is ALWAYS a goal--failing to explicitly discuss theme means a dropped goal.
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